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Thursday, August 22, 2019

Stem Challenge

Student Lab Sheet: Paper Chair Challenge                    
My Questions?




Were you successful in the challenge? No Why?I didn't make one I was mucking around


What was the most difficult part of the challenge? The sheet was the hardest part because I was not watching and paying attention


What was the best idea you came up with during this challenge? Nothing I was mucking around and I didn't make one

Did your paper chair work? Why or Why not?  What type of chair design did you use?no Why?I didn't make one I was mucking around



What did you learn about construction and engineering during this challenge? To listen when the teacher tells everyone something.

Usain Bolt

Explain Writing

WALT use a rubric to mark a piece of writing
Success Criteria
I will use the rubric to mark and then write why I gave it, that point.
I will add the total of points and then give it a level
In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school. Because of the new enrollments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is a new hall.
Why do we need a hall?

First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs  a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and we are feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed. 

Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class.

Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen.  We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home.

Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or gala days.

In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our  Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.

                                 Score     Reasons why you have given this mark

Ideas
4
She has lots of ideas with some information
Structure Language
5

Her writing is structured appropriately and is well developed. 
Organisation
5
Her ideas are organised into a basic paragraph.
Vocabulary
4
She uses a range of words and phrases to add detail.
Sentence Structure

4

She can write most of her sentences correctly.
Punctuation 
4
She mostly uses full stops and capital letters.
Spelling
5
She spells the majority of essential list words correctly. 
Total
31
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